| Close eye your and take your mine back in the past when you is young people if you old but if now you are young people use your mine to look your self don’t use your eye and see was you do when you are young people, if you can think the old and read my write then you think together with me when you read . Friend is people that young people stay with the most, friend is come to be the first when you have problem now is not parent, friend is the best control than remote control because when stay with a group of friend they will have a lot of power that can take over your self and control your to be right to be left good or bad you can not fight to get out , friend can be leader of every thing and choose it to your life if don’t do word that spell friend it will cut. So friend is the key man of young people because if you have a good friend the good thing will come we will do good thing go good way happy when your help your mine will strong when stay with good person and get better upgrade your self to stay a lot of far of bad friend they will take you to bad way bad thing always have only bad happy when someone cry bad friend can get you to be the person that don’t have price Now young people must learn at school in main and a lot to make knowledge and you must learn about now society what society is good and make you better you must go there but before you go to good society you must know how to choose good way and must know result of you choose .How to choose, know result of you choose is hard as same you must it in now world if you don’t know this thing you will hard to stay on this world and you can fail to be slave of some thing but you don’t know and think you are the boss of this thing Now young people is don’t have strong mine to be the winner in now society you must have some thing that you can catch can stay with and be helper something that I write is family parent they wait for you to came back and teach you HOW TO CHOOSE , KNOW RESULT OF YOU CHOOSE. This is young people in my picture what is in your picture. |
posted by dISpLaYnaMe @ 7:03 AM
4 Comments:
I think your ideas are good and rather true.Friends are the most who young people interests and care. But your grammars quite wrong in some speech, like your first sentence "close eye your" I think it should be "close your eye".Finally i like your blog it's easy to read.
Peace=w=
I agree with JR‘s thought. I think at the same way with him. Young people today are always with their friends. Some young people who have a good thinking, strong mind and can control themselves can find and having good friends. Their friends will help them to improve themselves in the good way. It’s not only the way you’re learning. Their friends will improve the way you think and can make you to be a good person in our society. I agree with your thought but I think young people today will be good or bad person in the future isn’t depending on their friends only. I think it depends on the environment and their parents when they are grow up.
Poy M.4/2
Hi!….this is Minnie. I think I agree with you. What you think is totally true and reasonable. Young people today are quite weak at heart and easily led by the society and people around so that’s what family is for, to support us and make us strong.
Your essay will be so good if you write better than this because it made me confused when I read it! I think your writing is quite difficult to understand and it took me ages to eventually get it so…..you should read it all over again after you finish writing and see if there’s any mistake. Anyway, this is just my opinion. You can just read and forget it but I hope it’s useful for you.
Jr
Hi! I think that I don’t agree with you. That’s true, we always stay with our friends. But friends aren’t everything of us! Our parent is better than our friends. But it depends on each person. I agree with you. If we meet good friends, we will have a good way. But if we meet bad friends, we will have a bad way too. Everything depends on us but friends have effect to us too.
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